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Certificate craze, as seeing in our surrounding, reflect a phenomenon a mounting barrage of people are keen on every test of certificate whether it is useful or not. In their opinion, possessing a great varity of certificates is essential in their future life. Various people have various ideas. Some people reckon that certificates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more corporations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. Another consider a good deal of certificates can make their resumes is more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation. It is of great significance to have certificate. Nonetheless, what certificates we have doesn't mean we can master them perfectly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bonus point, but too many certificates could get us lost.