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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Certificate craze, as seeing in our surrounding, reflect a phenomenon a mounting barrage of people are keen on every test of certificate whether it is useful or not. In their opinion, possessing a great variety of certificates is essential in their future life. Various people have various ideas. Some people reckon that certificates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more corporations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. Another consider a good deal of certificates can make their resumes are more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation.Actually it is of great significance to own certificates among works. Nonetheless, what certificates we have doesn't mean we can master them perfectly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bonus point, but too many certificates could get us lost.

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