题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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trust With the development of stociety , trust become more and more important , especially in business corperition . Trust is basic principle in people's life . On maintaining trust ,we will can have a friendly communicate each other ,we can have more friends and we we will be successiful easily.But if we not maintain trust ,it will result to distrust each other ,if so ,we will lost many golden things . So ,only can we maintaining good trust ,we can live in harmony, we will can have a wonderful life .So, how important it is to maintain the trust !