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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Certificate craze reflects a phenomenon that soaring people are keen on every test of certificate whether it is useful or not. In their opinion, possessing a great variety of certificates is essential in their future life. Various people have various ideas. Some people reckon that certificates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more corporations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. Another consider a good deal of certificates can make their resumes are more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation.Actually it is of great significance to have certificates. Nonetheless, what certificates we have doesn't mean we can master them perfectly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bonus point, but too many certificates could get us lost.
