文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Certificate craze reflects a phenomenon that an increasing number of people are keen on every test of certificate even though they don't know whether it is useful or not. In their opinion, possessing a great variety of certificates is essential in their future life. Various people have various ideas. Some people reckon that certificates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more corporations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. Another consider a good deal of certificates can make their resumes are more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation.Actually it is of great significance to have certificates. Nonetheless, what certificates we have doesn't mean we can master them perfectly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bonus point, but too many certificates could get us lost.