作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Certificate craze reflects a phenomenon that an increasing number of people are keen on every test of the certificate. In their opinion, possessing a great variety of certificates is essential in their future life. Various people have various ideas. Some people reckon that certificates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more corporations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. Another consider a good deal of certificates can make their resumes are more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation.Actually it is of great significance to have certificates. Nonetheless, what certificates we have doesn't mean we can master them perfectly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bonus point, but too many certificates could get us lost.