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2003年9月英语六级作文真题:图书流动量

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:35浏览次数:814
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图表作文,关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等),给出他们的流动比例对比,说明原因,并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。 
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.   The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.

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