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2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:49浏览次数:6984
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题目 温室花朵经不起风雨(题目需自拟)
说明 Study the following set o f drawings carefully and write an essay
要求
1.describe the set of drawings.interpret its meaning.
2.point out its implications in our life.
3.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文中词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较熟练地使用部分学术词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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A flower is in the full blossom without being ruinde by the rainy day because of protection fromthe greenhouse.Nevertheless,the forcing rain distroys it immidiatly.If we see the flower as us who are under the patrents' protection competely like greenhouse does.Maybe,some implications of two drawings we can demonstrated in our life. The message conweyde in the picture seems to be that too much protection makes us can't stand suffering sa stepping into society.Too much cosy enviorment gives birth to lots of promblems around us.Such as laking of abilities to suffer hardship or solve some problems by ourselves and so on. Adversity is the touchstone of the strong,just as fierce fire is that of gold,Seneca determined.Lisa Ray,the internationally famous actress,had suffered cancer six years ago.She has never giver up and made fundation for patients like her.Eventually,she not just wins the campaign between she and the cancer but also gets married and has a happiness family.So let's go out of the "greenhouse" to expose to the natural environment as early as we can.

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