2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

作者词汇量积累不错，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

A flower is in the full blossom without being ruined by the rainy day because of protection from the greenhouse.Nevertheless,the fierce rain destroys it immediatly.If we see the flower as us who are under the parents' protection completely like greenhouse does.Maybe,some implications of two drawings we can demonstrate in our life. The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that too much protection makes us can't stand suffering sa stepping into society.Too much cosy enviroment gives birth to lots of problems around us.Such as laking of abilities to suffer hardship or solve some problems by ourselves and so on. Adversity is the touchstone of the strong,just as fierce fire is that of gold,Seneca determined.Lisa Ray,the internationally famous actress,had suffered cancer six years ago.She has never giver up and made fundation for patients like her.Eventually,she not just wins the campaign between she and the cancer but also gets married and has a happiness family.So let's go out of the "greenhouse" to expose to the natural environment as early as we can.