小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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John is my best friend.I met him in 2010,when I came to work in Dubai.I was impressed by him when the first time I saw him. He has a strong and well-build body,as strong as the famous Hallyhood movie star ARNOLD. People who knows him told me that he had a great passion for gym,which makes him look young and attractive. Apart from that, he has a clean and handsome face,which always wear a friendly smile. Most importantly,he has a special personality.He is always optimistic and keeps a positive attitude to his life. All the times, he is happy like an angel,spreading his happiness to the people around him. John and I became closed friends,because we share a lot of common interests.We work at the same place,doing a similar job and meet almost the same people daily.We help each other, share our anger and happiness together.Those experience has lead us to learn to cherish our valuable friendship.