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Health is a state in which a person is feeling well. Recently, people are becoming increasing aware of the significance of being healthy. Though we all talk about the importance of health, only few of us have leaded a healthy life. As a matter of fact, we all have some bad habits, more or less. Therefore we need to pay more attention to our lifestyle, for it is health that is the most essential factor in our lives. Here are some methods of how to keep healthy. Firstly, stop smoking and drinking right now. Nicotine and alcohol can do harm to your health. Secondly, an apple a day keeps doctor away. There is a great deal of vitamin in vegetables and fruit. So the more vegetables you eat, the more vitamins you can get, and the healthier you will be. Thirdly, make a lot of friends. A recent survey has revealed that friends and joy can free people from tremendous pressure so that they are able to be in a good mood. As we all know, the state of mind is closely related to the physical condition. You may surprisingly find that you feel more energetic when you are cheerful and delighted. Finally, scientists have found that being closer to nature brings great advantages. People who are fond of growing flowers and plants in garden live longer than those who rarely go outdoors. I can’t resist concluding this article with several kernels of advice: eat vegetables as many as possible; spend some of your leisure time talking with friends and family; don’t watch TV while you are eating; give equal importance to entertainment as work. To which I’d only add: always stay in a good mood.
