2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

It's obvious that a strong will is the key to success.With a strong will,we may conquer obstacles on the road to success more easily for the reason that we firmly believe that we are born to success.On the contrary,if without it,we may get frustrated instantly when facing failure. Therefore,only those who have a strong determination will be able to complete the great task.For example,Lincoln,the president of American,had failed several times in the election of president but he never lost heart.Finally,with his great effort,he successfully abolished the slavery and suppressed the civil war. What'more,it's also proper to use this principle in us students' study.It's impossible for us to become a useful person without strong mind.Only when we make our mind to do something,will we have the power to change ourselves,even the world.