题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Despite the difference of personality ,identity,age,occupation,living environment and family background,two person combine together because of love.So,what is the cause of maintaining this love?As far as I’m concerned,trust is essential for a love relationship. Trust means one person firmly entrust his own heart to another.No matter what happens,one has reasons to believe a person and try to understand his intention in doing something when others oppose.Trust makes people more open and tolerance to others’ shortcomings,weakness and faults.Without trust,love will not last long. When being asked how to get along with a foreign husband,actress Vivian Wu said,”Trust and honest are most important factors in our marriage.Oscar and I are friends first,husband and wife second.”Vivian Wu has married for 14 years,she and her husband are still intimate as before.Trust enables the love relationship more strong and deep. If you want a long-term love relationship,trust is very essential.Trust,which bonds two different individuals,is the source of love.