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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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To trust is to believe and to accept others, regardless of their shortcomings. One who trust others will always be trusted at the same. The feeling of being trusted serves as an incredible strength to the person who recieve it. Thus, we shall try to maintain trust in order to make the world a greater place to live in. So how to maintain trust among people? Good begun, half done. If we intend to win the trust from others, we must first trust others. Sometimes, we pay too little attention on others to find their good sides; also, we ignore their efforts or hardwork because we just dislike them. Second, to have trust in oursleves is the first step to trust others. If one fails to believe in himself, he will definitely not believe his own thoughts and judgements to others, so he can't follow his heart to trust others. Besides, everyone should have good behaviors to convince others that he deserves others' trust. I believe these three points can best answer the question how to maintain trust among people.

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