2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

The chart demonstrars that doctoral degree has the lowest unemployment rate while the less than high school diploma has the highest unemploment rate and professional degree can earn the highest median weekly earnings.Namely,it is impotant to improve our educational level. Nowndays,some people think that study is not necessary.They want to use more time of working.Their parents pay no attention to them or even support that it is a good idea.Education is be ignored .In morden life ,knowledge and wisesome are impotant.People should improve themselves by studying becasuse of the conpetive stress.The social need a lot of tecnolege people who can rise up the country’s energy.In addition,the more knowledge we learn to,the more earnings we gain. In my opinion,wo should take more attention to education ,it is not only improve ourselves but also rise up the GDP in our country .At last ,let us study!