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If I am a college student in America,then I will go to library whenever I have part time.I like reading in the library,because the library's environment is very comfortable.I want to spend my time in it,and it will make me feel happy and forget the bad feeling.There are many kinds of books in the library,such as pop fiction,general nonfiction,science and art.I love all of them. There should be a current ratio about these books.I think the current ratio is 10 percent pop fiction,15 percent general nonfiction,40 percent science and 35 percent art.The reason why is that:First,we don't need to read too much about pop fiction,because they are no use for us,reading them are wasting our time.Second,we should read general nonfiction to promote our literature study,and they can improve our speaking skills.And the third,we need to read books about sciences and arts.Science is a country's power in the world,and it can change our daily life.Art is a way to see the world and the people who around us,which can help us see the world's beautiful landscape and the people's good part.Any way,sciences and arts are important to us. To me,I love reading books about arts and sciences.I want to be a person who will be elegant and gentle,so I should read books of arts;and I also don't want to be dropped by the world,so I should read books about sciences.