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The College Years are the Best Time in a Person's Life Through our total life, everyone would have various experience in one's different stages which affect our career development. Besides the life in childhood or the golden time in high school, but no one has more impact on our life than college years. The college years are the best time in a person's life. First of all, it is the best time to gain knowledge which is essencial for one to make living. The curriculum set in college provides the puples not only the knowledge itself but also the way of thinking. What's more, the professor in collges are more likely to be on the front of science or technique. What they taught must broaden the the students mind and the value of world, which is essencial for ones career development. Secondly, puples can benefit a lot from college life in building one's good relationship. The diverse activities held in campus make it easer to make freinds. What's more, it is hard to deny the fact that the freindship in college is much more reliable than the freindship in work. Whenever we come across problems, the freind in colleges alway offer us valuable advices. To sum up, the life in college can benefit one not only the valuable knowlege but also the golden time for ones relationship development. Only the college years be taken serious can the youth have a bright and succeful career.
