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It's not uncommon that many people are spending more and more leisure time watching television since it is a effective way to kill time and enjoy hapiness. But whether televisions has destroied communication among friends and family, I think, is till open to discuss. Admittedly, the proliferatin of televisions has occupied much time of communication among family and friends. In fact, all of us has ever experineced or are experiencing this story. When we arrive at home from school, the first thing is to open the television and enjoy the wonderfl TV play. the television programs, such as soap opera, cartoon and sports, are so appealing that we cannot help addicting to them.Sometimes, we even forget the time and existence of family members. Clearly, it is the television that impedes the communication among family and friends.
