初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文章在句法方面做的很棒，复杂句的比例可适当提高；层次欠清晰；请注意分段。

First I think we have to keep away from the book,TV and computer.If you read a book please set in the light room don't read book in the dirk room.Then when you watch TV,suffer the Internet or read the book don't keep whit long time If you notice this tips,you can do well to protect your eyes.