湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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our monitor is a boy. his name is Tom. he is fourteen years old, seems he is tall and thin. in normal he like wear sport clothes. he has passion for football, after class you can see him on the underground. he is very kind for his classmate. we like him.