湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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I have a nice moniter.Hername is Catherine. She is a thirteen years old girl with a black and long hair.She is very beatiful and cute.She likes bule best,so she ofen wear blue dress.She often stern to us,but sometimes she piays jokes with us.And she is good at English,She often help me to learn English.We all like her very much.