单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
Testerday Sam got up early at six and then went to the park by bike.He had a lovely time in the park.Sam had MCdonald's with his family.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmate still six.After dinner,Sam and her father go for a work.His father buy a CD for him.What a interesting day!