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How To Protect Our Eyes I think it's very important to keep good eyes.So, what we can do to protect our eyes?First,we must built a right habit in our studies,like,keep our eyes from books more than 30 center meters.Second, we should resisted to do the eyes protected exercise.It's very useful!Last,if we unluckily get a bad eyes corner,we should see the doctor in time.