福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

I am a student in CuiZihan Junior High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is Liu Kai. she is 13 years old. Liu Kai is tall and strong. her hair is yellow and short. she has a round face with big eyes, a small nose and a wide mouth. Now she is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. Liu Kai is my good friend. We like him very much.