拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I am a student in CuiZihan Junior High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is LiuKai. She is 13 years old. Liu Kai is tall and vigorous . Her hair is yellow and short. She has a round face with big eyes, an insignificant nose and a wide mouth. Now she is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. Liu Kai is my good mate. We like him extremely much.