拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I am a student in CuiZihan Junior High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is LiuKai. She is 13 years old. LiuKai is tall and vigorous. Her hair is yellow and short. She has a round face with big eyes, an insignificant and a wide mouth. Now she is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. Liu Kai is my good mate. We like him extremely much.