文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
I am a student in CuiZihan Junior High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is LiuKai. She is 13 years old. LiuKai is tall and vigorous. Her hair is yellow and short. She has a round face with big eyes, an insignificant and a wide mouth. Now she is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. LiuKai is my good mate. We like him extremely much.