小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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This year, my family had built a new house. It was designed and built by my father himself. It has three stores with two very big windows. I like them very much. Its outlook is red and you will think it is a ancient building when your first sight of it. You will see many fruit-trees around it. People who pass by our house will leave their apprciate. I feel proud of it. I love it very much.