小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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This holiday was wonderful! Because I had a great holiday to travel to Beihai, a city of Guangxi Provice. In there, we ate dilicious food in a resturant. After that, we travel to the beach, I was so exicieted, it was the first time I saw beach, a real beach, a in the picture or the TV. How wonderful! The water was lively, and the endless sea was wray in the sunshine just like a pretty gilr who dance in the ramatic place. We joyed, we smiled and we walked along the seaside. What a good time!