小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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Yesterday, My father, my sister and I had a travel to the Nanhai Yingshi City. When we arriveled at the gate of it . we can not help admire its spelend. It looked just similar with when we saw the buildings of ancient. Then, we entered and saw a great buildings, it is the palace with gold outlook. There are many beautiful sight inside it, like the Old Street of Hongkong and the Old Town of Jiangnan, etc.. Finaly, we have a good time at there.