小学二年级英语作文:My pet

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I have a pet who is a bird, named Cloris. Whose further is polish and the sound of it is clear. When I am down and alone, it always by my side, entertaining me with its song. When I go to shopping, it will wait for me to comr back on the trees in front of our house.It is my best friend, forever!