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I have a new pet.It is a dog.It is Ming Ming.It is one year old.It is very cute.It has short legs.It has big eyes and long ears.It‘s very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone.It likes running.Sometimes It likes playing with a ball.I like my pet very much. 我有一个新的宠物。它是条狗,叫明明。它一岁大,很可爱。它有一双短腿,大大的眼睛和长长的耳朵。它很小,有一条短短的尾巴。它很喜欢吃骨头,很爱跑。有时,它喜欢玩球。我非常喜欢我的宠物。