小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

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My favorite teacher is my junior teacher, Mr. Chen, who is tall and little crippled. However, he is positive with life and always told us some tips when we were in trouble. Sometime he is strictive with us because of the study. If we kept the irrcorrect attitude in our study, There was a conversation beteew he and us face to face. The more one sentence is that you have the wrong attitude of your study. Once I feel shy of it, overall, I miss it so much. I admire Mr. Chen, not only for his methon of teaching, but also his love to his students, all of our.