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Dear Li Ming， I’m Gina．It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots．According to your letter．I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting．There are some inexpensive hotels，which are clean and comfortable in both places．What’s more，you can enjoy sunshine，walk on the beach and swim every day． Besides，there are many good museums in Sydney．(It’s also a wonderful place for shopping．)And if you go to Hawaii，you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor，which is quite educational and historical．(And you can also enjoy exotic dances．) That’s just my idea．I hope it would give you some help． Yours， Gina
