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My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot. In the past, the small town was surrounded by tree, and fish were swimming flirty in clean creeks. The houses we lived in were simple and streets were narrow. People were hardworking but life was poor. Now, this town has many tall buildings, factories and lots of shops. Different kinds of cars are running on the roads. The manufacturing industry has developed fast whistle the environment turns into bad condition. The trees were cut down and little fish in the river. To tackle the pollution is the most important thing now.
In the past,there were plenty of trees in my hometown,fish could be seen in the river playing games,the street was simple and narrow,people had to work very hard to make a living. And now the high building can be seen anywere,and cars full of the street,the development have changed people's life,but sametime the environment getting worse,the trees and fishes are gone,it has becomes so important to protecte the environment .
taylorshing：第二句的定语从句用的不恰当
it has made great changes 这里的改变应该不用加s吧
hahawanderful：My hometown My hometown is situated in the middle of our city.In the past,it has beautiful scenery that be surrounded of green trees and the fishs were having fun in the lake,what's more,the house was simple and brude,person's woke-life were poor.But now,it has made great changes in my hometown.The high buildings are standing there densely and the big and large cars always appear in the street,even if the change brings much benefit,it also brings some troubles,such as the trees has reduced quickly and the fish has disappeared,it has no time to wait so we should take some methods to deal with the problem of pollution.
第二句的定语从句用的不恰当
My hometown My hometown is situated in the middle of our city.In the past,it has beautiful scenery that be surrounded of green trees and the fishs were having fun in the lake,what's more,the house was simple and brude,person's woke-life were poor.But now,it has made great changes in my hometown.The high buildings are standing there densely and the big and large cars always appear in the street,even if the change brings much benefit,it also brings some troubles,such as the trees has reduced quickly and the fish has disappeared,it has no time to wait so we should take some methods to deal with the problem of pollution.
