七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning,after that he rode his bike to park,he had a great fun playing in the park. He had lunch in Mcdonald's with his parents at noon. He was playing basketball with his friends from four o'clock to six o'clock in the afternoon. He had walked with his father after dinner, his father bought a classical CD for him. what's a fuuny day for Sam !