高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且拼写检查还需加强；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My favorite sport Football is a famous sport all over the word,also it's my favorite sport game. When I was a child,I get to back after school,in the way,I picked up a football,it's preaty,i love it very mush.then,take way.I called some friend to play the football.After then ,I always play football with my frient. Beckham is my favorite sport star.becoming a professional football player is my dream.I will make it come true.