高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport Football is a famous sport all over the world,play football is my favorite hobby. When I was a child,I get to back after school,I picked up a football by chance,I love it very mush.I called some friend to play the football.After then,I always play football with my frient. Beckham is my favorite star.Becoming a professional football player is my dream.I will make it come true.