高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport Football is a famous sport all over the world.Play football is my favorite hobby. When I was a child.I get to back after school.I picked up a football by chance.I love it very mush.I called some friend to play the football.After then,I always play football with my friend. Beckham is my favorite star.Becoming a professional football player is my dream.I will make it come true.