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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2871
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Recently,the accidents a Chinese city has become the focus of our society.The table above demonstrates clearly that remarkable have taken place in the terms of main accident causes.Based upon the data provided.One can see that the pedestrians crossing roads carelessly has been on a steady rise by 12% from 2004 to 2005.Meanwhile,the drivers failing to give a signal has sharply down to 5% from 2004 to 2005. It's no difficult for us to come up with some possible factors to account for this trend.First of all,due to the policy in China,the population is a premise of economic development.In addition,science and technology have been advancing at an amazing speed,unfortunately,it has brought us unexpected problem.Thus,were it not for the large population,accidents a Chinese city wouldn't increase so rapidly. As discussed above,the statistic of rise and fall seam to be isolated,but closely related to each other.And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.

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