英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 留学> 雅思> 真题> 2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2675
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Does news play an important role in our life? Nowaday, it has become a hot topic when people try to explain the functions providing by news. Different people stand at various views towards this. Some people affirm that news is useless to our society as they think that there are no connection between news and our life, and to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news is just wasting our valuable time since they argue that we all have our own business to do. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the above ideas towards the news. The people holding this view has narrow perspective. It is undeniable that news sufficiently provides us the opportunity to learn the world, no matter where we are and what time it is. Completely contrarily, news brings a strong connection to our social life due to it always presents us the events occured around us or outside our country. If we study or do our own research entirely far away our society, I believe that will make us break away from our social life. Moreover, with the rapid development of our society and our technology, only well knowing what others are doing, can we have a significant improvement of our skills and make a better life to cope with the challenge. In conclusion, there is no doubt that news is a fundament ingredient in our social life. Without knowing other's work in the world, we cannot refine and strengthen our own ability. We should constantly read news, no matter how much time we have to spend on this. Only in this way, can we keep the same pace with the world and then build our beautiful life.

会员评论0个评论)
jws2yuyi
金币:8

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.5我爱MMJ

人气:88发布:2013-09-21

得分:89.0vaffory

人气:42发布:2014-04-09

得分:88.5shinerise

人气:52发布:2013-11-30

得分:88.5ljw124

人气:25发布:2016-08-23

得分:86.5ablighttree

人气:43发布:2015-10-22