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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章层次较为清晰；采用了一些简单的从句。
As we can see from the picture above a bottle is lying on the ground and some of milk were pour out.There are two persons standing around,one of they shank his face breathless and saying:Oh my god,it all over.But the other one saying:God bless me,there be still some milk.What the author illustrates in the cartoon reflects a hot topic which caused our though. The purpose of this picture is that while get in trouble with study,work or life different people have different action toward hit.Optimistic person always finding the goodness while the negatives complain about what they have lost.In a word,one person whether could success which depends on his attitude towards difficult. In my opinion,we should learn from the optimistic attitude.No matter what difficult we have met in life.We should smile.Only in this way can we achieve our goals.
