小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather used to be a soldier, who is very strong and energy. He is very kind and smart. When we make a mistake, he will tell the wise to us and smile kindly. He has a flexible hands. When in the festival, he always makes many beautiful and funny toys to us. In our family, there are many blankets and sweeps which were made of him, my grandfather. I miss him and I love him.