小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My grandfather used to be a soldier, who is very strong and energy. He is very kind and smart. When we make a mistake, he will tell the wise to us and smile kindly. He has a flexible hands. When in the festival, he always do many beautiful and funny toys to us. In our family, there are many blankets and sweeps are made from him, my grandfather. I miss him and I love him.