小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather used to be a soldier, who is very strong and energy. He is very kind and smart. When we make a mistake, he will tells the wise to us and smile kindly. He has a flexible hands. When in the festival, he always does many beautiful and funny toys to us. In our family, there are many blankets and sweeps were made from him, my grandfather. I miss him and I love him.