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小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:53浏览次数:2095
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用英语描述下自己的祖父,字数在100字以内.
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

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My grandfather is a famous professor. He is over sixty now, but he is in good health, and his hair is still black. He is tall and hand some, and looks like a gentleman. Believe it or not, he began to learn to drive last year, and now he drives his white Nissan every day.   My grand father has taught English for about 35 years, and he has been to many countries, such as America, France and Canada. Now he is on holiday in Europe with my grandmother.   He is very kind to me.

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