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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2871
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;全文结构较为严谨;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

As can be seen from the table all kinds of causes affect the number of accidents in Chinese from 2005 to 2004.What the author illustrates in the above table reflect a hot topic which caused our attention.So many reasons contribute to the change of accident percentage.But the main causes as following. From the table we can see that the percentage of accident have increased by ten percentage point because drivers turning left without due care. And other causes also raise the percentage of accident like drivers traveling too close to other vehicles,pedestrians crossing roads carelessly and drivers driving under the influence of alcohol.Those causes we have analysed above which all increased accident percentage.When drivers failing to give a signal less accident would happen.The phenomenon described in the above vividly reflect what we have discussed. Of the causes we have analysed ,to make the public realize how to defend the accident is the most importance,for, consciousness is the precondition of action.Only after being conscious,can we take concrete measures to reduce the percentage of city accident.

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