2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

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From the table we can see that the percentage of accident have increased by ten percentage point because drivers turning left without due care. And other causes also raise the percentage of the accident like drivers traveling too close to other vehicles,pedestrians crossing roads carelessly and drivers driving under the influence of alcohol.Those causes we have analysed above which all increased accident percentage.When drivers failing to give a signal less accident would happen.The phenomenon described in the above vividly reflect what we have discussed. Of the causes we have analysed ,to make the public realize how to defend the accident is the most importance,for, consciousness is the precondition of action.Only after being conscious,can we take concrete measures to reduce the percentage of city accident.