2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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The two pie-chart above demonstrates clearly that remarkable changes have taken place in terms of shopping on line vs. shopping in the department store.Based up the data provided.One can see that the number of mobile phone has been on a steady increased.In 2009,around 48% people choose mobile phone to reading but the percentage went sharply rise to 60% in 2010.Meanwhile,the number of the laptop has been a steady decline.From 46% to 34%.And other has witnessed litter change. It's no difficult for us to come up with some possible factors to account for this trend.First of all,were it not for the larger population,shopping online wouldn't increase so rapidly.In addition,science and technology have been advancing at an amazing speed.As a result ,shopping online was bring us tons of convenience and comfort in our life.As is known to all,today's world differs greatly from what it was before. As disscussed above,the statistic of rise and fall seam to be islated,but are closely reated to each other.And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for a quite a while in the forthcoming years.