初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My dream is to be a teacher. When I was a little girl, i dreamt that i could be an English teacher. I like English very much, My English teacher likes me. Therefor,I am good at English. I thanks for her help. I want to be an English teacher like her.I can help with other students.